This forest is no joke. If Vaira had to expend themselves just for the Nuckelavee, I can't imagine what other more sinister, larger beings might do to them...
Can I say that it's really enjoyable to read the way you describe the magick scenes. Everything from the way that Vaira's hair moves for currents that only they can feel to the way that she speaks incantations to ward/fight against the malevolent beings... I think what makes it so enjoyable for me is the juxtaposition of power against what is typically painted as a quaint, gentle backdrop, being that of a forest.
Though as we know, there are plenty of forests that don't have its visitors' bests interests at heart...
Thanks so much for this! 🌿 Pacing has been tricky since I shuffled some character arcs, but I think it’s shaping into something cool (and a little chilling ☺️). I love forests that look tranquil from afar, then slip into something insidious up close, so I’m glad that came through. Vaira’s extra special to me, since she’s inspired by my daughter, and I love writing her magick flowing like that. Life’s had me by the collar lately, but I’m hoping to get back into Substack more regularly soon!
This forest is no joke. If Vaira had to expend themselves just for the Nuckelavee, I can't imagine what other more sinister, larger beings might do to them...
Can I say that it's really enjoyable to read the way you describe the magick scenes. Everything from the way that Vaira's hair moves for currents that only they can feel to the way that she speaks incantations to ward/fight against the malevolent beings... I think what makes it so enjoyable for me is the juxtaposition of power against what is typically painted as a quaint, gentle backdrop, being that of a forest.
Though as we know, there are plenty of forests that don't have its visitors' bests interests at heart...
Thanks so much for this! 🌿 Pacing has been tricky since I shuffled some character arcs, but I think it’s shaping into something cool (and a little chilling ☺️). I love forests that look tranquil from afar, then slip into something insidious up close, so I’m glad that came through. Vaira’s extra special to me, since she’s inspired by my daughter, and I love writing her magick flowing like that. Life’s had me by the collar lately, but I’m hoping to get back into Substack more regularly soon!
It’s not going anywhere A.M! And neither am I - invested in Familyr!